my ideas abowt toy story

toy story is a good moovy i wonder if i ckood chag it iwood go all the way back to one woody was ohlone thin he fownd buzz recs

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2 comments

  • dad

    Great job Rachel!

    (This is the first blog post Rachel has ever written by herself. I asked her to read it and recorded her with iPadio, which I added to her post before publishing it.)

  • Hello Rachel,
    I love your ideas about Toy Story. I’m going to share them with my nephew Jackson who is a big Toy Story fan. He is the one who really got me excited about Toy Story. He is a first grader and will appreciate your point of view.

    Keep writing more blog posts. You write very well. Perhaps you might like to comment on my classroom blog once school starts. I know my students would love to hear from you. It will help them with their writing.

    Bye for now.

    Maria Knee in NH

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